Pride or Faith

Temptation Returned

This is just a place for me to let my members know what's going on in my life and keep them updated on the progress of new chapters.

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Need to be more focused

Posted by prideorfaith on June 27, 2009 at 3:36 PM Comments comments (0)

Alright it's been a few days and once again I find myself letting little things draw me what's important.  Not good.  I need to refocus and put my energy into things that matter.  One of those is this story.  I love this story but it's not going to write itself and I need to get myself in gear. 


Working on a rewrite of the prologue.  I know a lot of people like it but it's a bit to sexual and also i think a perspective change would be good.  Once I get the new prologue written I will transfer the current prologue to miscellaneous work so people can compare the two.  Feed back will help immensly. 


anyway back to work. 



Working on a rewrite of the Prologue

Posted by prideorfaith on June 15, 2009 at 3:18 PM Comments comments (0)

Alright, since I was slacking I went back and reread some of my work and realized it is decent but needed work.  I've decided to rewrite the prologue and will have that up sometime either today or tomorrow. 


As far as everything else goes.  Having recently gone through a tough break up I have realized that I was letting a lot of things slip that I shouldn't have.  This being one of them.  Can't blame the girl it was my fault for become way to caught up in the relationship.  As much as it hurts this is the best thing for me in that it's jump started me and gotten back to moving forward with my writing and, more importantly, my life. 


Any one else ever fail miserably at that whole "Lets be friends" thing?  I am pretty sure there are many of us.  I simply couldn't handle it and we have stopped talking.  It's to bad she was a good friend but it just wasn't meant to be.  As for me I'm writing again and that's a great thing. 



I've been slacking

Posted by prideorfaith on June 8, 2009 at 2:52 PM Comments comments (0)

ok here is where I apologize for slacking so bad.  I have allowed things in my personal life to take me away from writing and, if I ever want to finish this story, I need to be much more diciplined.  I have recently gone through a break up (not quite nasty but, regardless, break ups are always tough) and will be using that emotional energy to channel into my writing.  I hope to have the next chapter up by this weekend.


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